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You Could Never

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Wanda's final words in infinity war (according to tumblr because I couldn't remember what her last words were)

she protecc
she attacc
but most importantly
she may not love vision back
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Okie dokie, time to critique this. So first of all, the anatomy is pretty good. The shoulders, arms, and torso look fine and the face looks pretty good too. The only thing is that I would recommend adding eyebrows to the character and maybe a couple lines to indicate the eyelids. This helps to better show that they are closed. The flower garland could do with curving more to fit the shape of the skull rather than being a straight line across the head and it would make the picture adhere more to perspective and look more convincing. You did a good job at putting the features lower on the face, as this makes it seem as though her head is tilted down, however I would recommend moving the hairline further down as well. I do have one complaint though, the background is a little odd. I think it would look better if the blue was a bit less saturated and the clouds should be directly above the character instead of behind. Another thing about clouds is that they tend to be kind of stretched out and flat on the bottom but puffy on the top instead of just round. The shading is fairly decent as well, however since the lightsource is coming from the top, there shouldn't be shading on the tops of her shoulders or her shirt. : P